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The Kill

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For =SuicuneNorth's contest [link] The challenge was to draw a picture of one of her OCs and make it go with the song "The Kill" by 30 Seconds to Mars

At first I thought I wouldn't be able to join from the time crunch I had in June with finishing up school, older owed pieces, vacation and all, but since she extended it I gave it a go. ^w^

Ok! So, for anyone that is reading, I chose to draw Eonstar! Scourge's daughter! (read the warrior series) who tried to be nice at first (if I'm correct) but who she really is inside came out and killed out the good. Now she's the feared tyrant of BloodClan!


"What if I wanted to break
Laugh it all off in your face
What would you do?

What if I fell to the floor
Couldn't take all this anymore
What would you do, do, do?

Come break me down
Marry me, bury me
I am finished with you

What if I wanted to fight
Beg for the rest of my life
What would you do?

You say you wanted more
What are you waiting for?
I'm not running from you

Come break me down
Marry me, bury me
I am finished with you

Look in my eyes
You're killing me, killing me
All I wanted was you

I tried to be someone else
But nothing seemed to change
I know now, this is who I really am inside

Finally found myself
Fighting for a chance
I know now, this is who I really am

Come break me down
Marry me, bury me
I am finished with you, you, you

Look in my eyes
You're killing me, killing me
All I wanted was you

Come, break me down
Break me down
Break me down

What if I wanted to break?
What if I, what if I, what if I
Bury me, bury me"




Art (c) to me
Eonstar (c) =SuicuneNorth
Warriors (c) Erin Hunter
Grunge Brush (c) ~Metal-CX
Rain Brush (c) ~Faeth-design
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:star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

I will start by saying I do love what you have done to represent both the younger, good side and the older, evil side of Scourge. The background is rather interesting but not so much to take away from the focus. Most people draw him with blue eyes however I do like what you have done. The shadow does bring mystery and the shape is great. I love the red eyes. I like that you show that the teeth and claws in his collar are pierced through not made like that, although the color could be slightly more realistic. Maybe a little yellow or light brown to show they are teeth and claws not regular spikes. The shading in the fur is great; it really gives him depth and personality. For the wording you can’t really see the first line ‘This is who I’ I would have made it a little bigger or in bold to make it more noticeable. Over all I give you a 9/10 for creativity, skill, detail, and arrangement. Great job! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" title=":) (Smile)"/>